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Post  Simon8974 Fri Jan 06, 2012 2:20 pm

Name : Simon
Age: 13
SteamID: STEAM_0:0:23014933
Steam Name: OnAniX (DK) Aka Simon

Formal OTA experience: I have never been a OTA before

IC information:
should be around 200 words more or less. Im gonna call my character "Simon" (in this history)
Simon grew up as a happy boy, with good familly and good friends and with good sense. when Simon turned 19 years old the earth was invaded by alliens who was called "Combines" He admired them, he admired that they took over earth in only 7 hours, he admired there good ability to take control. From that day he allways wonted to be a combine! (OTA)
Simon is strong, young and loyal. He know he's place and are willy to obey the Union at any level, from jumping of a cliff to Re-Educating Citizens. He thinks that the Union will control humanity for ever, So he wonna help them badly.

Why should you be OTA: same around 100 words more or less.
Im mature and good at handling that big a responssible as being a OTA.
Im good at thinking before i act, and i think that i will help the Union alot to keep control over the city.
I perfectly know what to do as a OTA, and what there job is (To be the mucles of the Combine)
I will obey my superior and i will show my worth to them.
I wil learn the Citizens how to act. (By force if needed to)

Can you donate: Yes, i can. But i probaly wont do it right now since i just have donated for CCA.

Do you know how to RP: Examples Yes, i do. Her is an example as a ota:
/me Goes over to Anti-citizen.
Anti-citizen: /me Starts to open fire.
/me Shooting back at the Anti-citizen (s2m not s2k) and call radio to backup.
Back up arrives and the Anti-citizen gives up, and lay down he's weapon.
/me Calls for Jury for trial (even though i could have executed without trial as i am a OTA)
Jury arrives and take him to interrogation cell.


What can you do to help the community: Well im a good and normal guy, im mature so i will probaly help you out alot. I have also donated allready to be a CCA.

Can you use propper grammar: Yes, i can.


That was my application hope you liked it and i get to be a OTA. The End.

Simon8974

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Post  Stealthkibbler Fri Jan 06, 2012 2:50 pm

Most of the categories has less than the expected words. Needed 100-200 words for the Backstory. Needed atleast 100 words for the reason. Minor Grammar mistakes, in the overall Grammar is pretty good. Please fix these problems. Also think into how you're making your app, try not to rush it. I expect good apps to take 4-12 hours to make. Make your app, check back on it. Check it everytime you make a change to it. Make sure there are no Grammar mistakes, also be sure you haven't missed anything.

Denied.

I will give you a chance to re-apply without delays.

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Post  Modifikator Sun Jan 08, 2012 1:39 am

True that , good applications takes a long time to write Sleep
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